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-Lynnyan- is from US United States • 17 y/o • Female

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Murder Operation by Blitzø

I absolutely love your stories! Again, a little pointer...
When you use quotations, make a new paragraph for each person speaking.
other than that, it was absolutely wonderful!

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Dead Promises by Blitzø

This was great! I loved how you used quotations in the poem as well. I didn't find anything that really stuck out in a bad sense, but then again I'm not very poetic...

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Y.O.U. by Blitzø

This really lifted my spirits! I hope you're alright, though. If you need anyone to talk to, I'm here for you. Whatever you may be going through, I hope you can stick with this person you speak of and push through. Keep going, the world needs you, too!

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Oogway by Blitzø

This was hilarious, I loved it!

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Cult of Sins - Prologue by 𝔞𝔰𝔥𝔦𝔡𝔬𝔯𝔦_

Yes, please! It's still just as creepy as the first time I saw it. I really wanna know what happens. D:

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Dreams N' Other Stuff by PuffyPancakes

Very amusing, good job! XD
No, I haven't had a dream like the one you first described, or maybe I just don't remember it-
I actually have managed to not hit the ground in the falling dream. I start levitating at the last second. It gives me the weird gut feeling like you said.
I've never written a dream down, but I remember the weird ones. Or, maybe I only have weird dreams..? I have some of them posted if you wanna check those out- Or, you know, if you don't-

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The Pain by hvdiyya

The tragedy of losing someone so very dear to you. It hurts and you showed that really well! I like how you changed up the style throughout the poem, it made it interesting to read. Great job!

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I Am Sorry by HazbinAllover

I don't know what it is that you did, but I'd forgive you. And if whoever this is for is important, they will too.

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