AaronTheRocker

This was really neat :) I like how you made the storytelling into like a staircase. One step at a time with each conflicting occurrence, it all came together.

I'd say this is pretty good. Also amazed by how many areas of writing you delved into.

I love this. Such a crappy end for someone so talented. It was great to read about his life as I didn't know much about him previously. The tribute to him in their S&M2 concert was awesome. Thanks so much for sharing this.

It's brave to share this opinion. Looking at the reviews is kind of funny because most of them are people agreeing with you, and those reviews are downvoted to -4 or some such number, and it just amuses me that they're completely silent but still feel spiteful and angry enough to do that.
Guys, if you're reading this, just learn to deal with other people having and expressing opinions that are different than yours.

Truly so many untold stories inside of this beautiful earth. I really like the delicate beauty of Aurora borealis described as a scar demanding to be seen, as a wild spirit burning across the sky. Really good subtlety here. I also liked the stanza about blood and how the darkness of things can cause a fire in us.
also, I looked up Haŋhépi Ižáŋžaŋ and all I found was a recipe for pudding (not sure how that correlated) but I like how it's unknown to me. It adds to the mystery of earths' treasures painted in the poem.

Hello hope you are fine. I wish to inform you that you have been nominated to feature in "THE WORLD WRITES AWARDS 2020"
Under the category 50 best Poem writers of the year.
THE WORLD WRITES AWARDS is a yearly international anthology which features the best works of the writers around the world.
Entry fee is free. You will receive a free ebook once published and also a certicificate of Congratulations.
Taonga Mutambo Jr
Chief Editor
THE WORLD WRITES AWARDS