AaronTheRocker

Whoa...that took a quick turn towards the end. The idea is pretty gnarly, something different and something new. All you need now is something old, something borrowed and something blue. HA!😅
Great poem.

Aww, so adorable. Just filled me right up.😊

This is certainly a different and unique way to view parenthood. Straight out of the gate it had the dispositions of how a child came about whether out of wedlock, infidelity, rape, pure love. And it's not only that which is seen in a child, but also what a parent does because kids are impressionable, especially at a young age. We in general, not just parents, are guilty of such legacy wanted to leave behind. I'm sure every person who has been brought onto this earth has at least one trait similar to their parents. That would be the legacy left on.

This also goes into not just abstract ideas such as the legacy, but also the physical beings like sleepless nights and grey hairs with worry lines. All that effort, money and time spent with a child is excruciating and consuming of an individual. It's as if a parent does live the life of a child being concerned and catering for their needs. The question is whether it is more for the needs of the child or the parent. Because in the end, are we afraid of what we left behind? I'm sure we have regrets so...

Love the flow, love the choice of vocab, overall idea is phenomenal and brought attention to question such thought.

Hell of a story ya got here. Reminds me of an in-depth interview like on 60 minutes and 20/20.
Not much repetition in terms of adjectives and verbs, but mostly consisted words that most books wouldn't have which deserves an astounding (or what you might call, 'elephantine, copious, monumental') round of applause.

Strong words in a strong poem. From the beginning to end it is unique.

Poor guy. Living to know that all the people surrounding you die except for you. I'd say he's a deathtrap so that would make him unlucky.

I am positive that everyone has had the, "I don't know" moments in their lives. I mean, to add onto it, I'll say, "why do we walk on two feet and not crawl on four?" Who really knows. We just do. It may seem "normal", but is it?
This is fascinating and I totally relate to it.

You are a wise one. Wiser than a Jedi. You could be wiser than Confucius at this point with your writings. Damn you're good at writing a "bad" view and making it good for all readers. You have words that everyone should consider and think about in/for life.