Adalyne5

I really liked it! Definitely kept my interest throughout the whole thing. Good character building too. I felt like I connected to him and him them well. Well done.

This is interesting. I am very curious to see where you take this and how the rest of it turns out. It's very unique. I really liked it.

Really liked this piece

Really liked this piece. I liked the pace of it and the heart racing and then slower scenes. Really nice work. You could even draw out the action packed scenes a little more. Can't wait to see more of your work.

Really impressed with this piece. It kept me moving forward, and gave just enough description that I could use my imagination. Great Job. Would like to see more of your work!