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Adalyne5

Adalyne5 is from US United States • 27 y/o

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SaturnStar
Rich Powell reviewed Wanderer

I love emotive stories like this. Good job - keep up the good work!

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Lussac
Lussac reviewed Wanderer

I really enjoyed reading this. The very unexpected ending was brilliant!

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IanG
IanG reviewed Wanderer

Try 'Father retires to the living room# rather than 'father resigns to the living room'. Resigning refers to quitting a job due to pressure or a crisis, retire can mean leaving a scene or a room voluntarily.
That said, I like your descriptions of nature and the twist at the end is a good one. Keep it up.

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MBailey
Matt Bailey reviewed The Seed to Life

I like it! I like the journey the seed takes down the river, and I sympathised with the seed too!

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MBailey
Matt Bailey reviewed And Then There Were Three

Very, very good. I was gripped throughout! You could almost leave it as a story in it's own right, and leave it to the imagination about what happened to the boys before and after... just an idea.

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SJAnon
Selena Joan reviewed And Then There Were Three

I loved it! And I agree with Matt, I don't think you need to add anything else to this.

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negatorri
monique giannoni reviewed You Were a Game and I Wanted to Play

This is actually really good!!

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