Skylar

What the heck, why do you insist on making me cry

Wow! This is so good, and so sad!

Wow, you're really good! I read one of your other stories, The Girl Who Is Friends With Everybody, and I loved it. The emotion is really strong in your writing, and it's amazing! I hope you continue writing!

This is so amazing! I love the flow!

This is so beautiful. I've always loved repetition of sentences, they just seem to bring out more emotion, more... I dunno. Just more. Keep writing!

I hate talking to people about my... Problems. Just like you said, I don't understand it myself, so why should they? Why should I trust them with knowledge about my thoughts and feelings when I don't tell even my closest friends?

I love this! It's kind of simple, and kind of stated in a matter of fact way, but I think that helps emotion go through. It's really good!