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Andy (Formerly Apemann)

apemann is from GB United Kingdom • 65 y/o • Male

Writer, story-teller, reader, dog-lover and humourist!
Andy (Formerly Apemann)

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PoeticT
PoeticT reviewed Pretend You Don't See Her

Well versed piece that flows with pain of another

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autumn
GONE reviewed Pretend You Don't See Her

this is good, but hard to relate to for me. but i like it very much.

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why_now
why_now reviewed Pretend You Don't See Her

I really enjoyed this piece...I've been bullied for the past 9 years, being in high school doesn't make it better either. I like how I can connect to this piece but not in a good way. Your writing is truly amazing!

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lemonslice
lemonslice reviewed Getaway

I liked the twist but I disliked the use of the adverb in "yells loudly". How do you yell "silently"?

1
lemonslice
lemonslice reviewed Classification

A couple of dialogue punctuation errors, but otherwise a pretty funny tale. Reminiscent of Monty Python delight.

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neehu
neehu reviewed Blackout

the title the end all just falls in place.Maybe you can add a bit more description...maybe he can go through what happened during the day and the suspense can be that hes the one who is going to die.Just a random though that i got after reading the story .....:) but overall it was good

1
snowmoon
moon reviewed Choices

abusive. total reality. this story can make someone puke. I read the whole story'
and I would have placed a character in place of general. I chose to read the
story to myself. Others would want to believe reality of truth

0
SUNQUEEN51067
SUNQUEEN51067 reviewed Penny Dreadful

Even though the story was somewhat sad, it was still okay

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