United Kingdom • 65 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Very good! I enjoy this story a lot! Missing a few commas here and there, but it's probably different in the U.K.
Not friends with Robert Rankin, are you? :)
Even though I have never experienced bullying, I could deeply relate to this as the school I am in is for rich people and I am average, so I didn't really think I would fit in. Good use of words, but there could be a few deeper vocabulary. Good job!
I really enjoyed this piece...I've been bullied for the past 9 years, being in high school doesn't make it better either. I like how I can connect to this piece but not in a good way. Your writing is truly amazing!
this is good, but hard to relate to for me. but i like it very much.
Well versed piece that flows with pain of another
I would suggest using stronger word choice, but since the people you're writing about are shallow, it makes a good parallel to keep it more simple. Good story about a common issue that isn't spoken of enough.
You shared her side perfectly. The stuttering, the messing words up. It was well written.