United Kingdom • 65 y/o • MaleReviews Received
I thought this was a really good story. Good job. I don't think I could do a story that good, keep up the good work!
I really enjoyed this piece...I've been bullied for the past 9 years, being in high school doesn't make it better either. I like how I can connect to this piece but not in a good way. Your writing is truly amazing!
abusive. total reality. this story can make someone puke. I read the whole story'
and I would have placed a character in place of general. I chose to read the
story to myself. Others would want to believe reality of truth
u left us on a cliff helppp
You shared her side perfectly. The stuttering, the messing words up. It was well written.
Even though I have never experienced bullying, I could deeply relate to this as the school I am in is for rich people and I am average, so I didn't really think I would fit in. Good use of words, but there could be a few deeper vocabulary. Good job!
Not that relatable but I still love a good ol' adrenaline rush. Love it, but I don't want this to happen in real life.
This story was terrible. I hated it so much. Gross, incompetent and no need for writing. And also, this comment was INSPIRED by ur rude comment to kat. Thanks v much and once again, ur very rude,