United Kingdom • 64 y/o • MaleReviews Given
Regrettably not all of your poems follow the true haiku 5-7-5 syllables rule. However, an interesting - if somewhat macabre - collection.
Interesting poem. Your credits in the 'author's notes' box are unnecessary...
Well here's one day when you can feel very much accepted. :-) Good poem.
A nice poem - but take more care with your punctuation. I look forward to reading more of your work in future :-)
So much said in so few words. I like this - a lot!
I quite enjoyed the style of your writing. It's innovative and interesting, in spite of the bleak subject matter. I have to admit to being somewhat baffled by your 'author's note' comment... Overall, a commendable effort.
An unusual and interesting story which was well told. I like your imagination and your unusual ideas. Well done!
A good story well told. However, I found your introduction to the story annoying: I do not like to be told how I will feel before I have even begun to read a story. Please read my piece 'How to Write a Teaser'. You might find it helpful and informative...