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I agree!, I know lots of stories about soldiers who get severely injured defending our country and loss so much, some suffer from PTSD and end up taking their lives and some others lost a leg and can no longer serve so they are released and they go back home empty-handed with no help from our government, it is so skewed up! It breaks my heart when I hear about those stories. Thank you for telling this in a story and addressing this issue that need's to be fixed. Every voice counts. I love my country and the men who die to keep the flag flying in the sky. I can only wish that this issue would be fixed.

Cool... how old are you going to be when you ask these questions to yourself again?

This was pretty good for your first poem great job!

I love this story! It has such an amazing story to tell. Dancing is an amazing way in expressing yourself, and I'll agree with you their dancing is more fun when there is two.

Very nice poetry. I love how nicely it flows. 👍

Great job, I love how well you can write poetry! 👍

Nice poem, and yes Grieff will eventually pass. It is a trial in our life that many of us go through and it is good to have someone to lean on, good job!