Reviews Given
I strongly disagree
Cool... how old are you going to be when you ask these questions to yourself again?
This was pretty good for your first poem great job!
I love this story! It has such an amazing story to tell. Dancing is an amazing way in expressing yourself, and I'll agree with you their dancing is more fun when there is two.
Very nice poetry. I love how nicely it flows. 👍
Great job, I love how well you can write poetry! 👍
Nice poem, and yes Grieff will eventually pass. It is a trial in our life that many of us go through and it is good to have someone to lean on, good job!