United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
At some points the rhymes felt akward and out of place but other then that i really loved it short and straight to the point with so many hidden layers great job
I'm not an expert on the technical aspects of poetry, but I agree with your sentiments here.
You've got to see yourself as God sees you. He says you are fearfully and wonderfully made. That is the only body you are going to get so be kind to it. And be kind to yourself. You deserve it. You write beautifully!
This is not satire. It sounds narrow-minded. Are you sure you don't have a complex?
Vaping is often a destructive habit, so I don't know about it being fine, but... I won't judge, I guess.
As for you being a man, you're 14. How long ago was puberty? Grow up and DO things with your body before deciding it's the wrong one.
i think this is a really good story because your expressing there love for your significant other but on another note i don't think it is a good story because in the tittle they didn't make it that clear about if it was about a baby baby or your boyfriend or something