ClaudiaM

*Claps* This is a good story to be honest. But here’s my question, does the mom not care he’s collecting skins, or what? But this is a good story, keep up the work!

Really liked the twist. Excellent build up with just enough info to lead the audience in the 'wrong' direction, with great reveal at the end.

I like the twist it wasn't the kind of skin i was thinking about :)

Well done! Like Chubby Checker, it's a great twist!

Nice twist. I could not guess what skins you were talking about.

Brilliant! Didn't see that coming.

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I was not expecting that, and got weird looks from my classmates when I gasped.