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This is an impressive piece for such a young writer. I can believe in your narrator and the plea for reconcilliation is heartfelt.

I liked this. Very brave of you to continue actually writing whilst experiencing rough turbulence... although I imagine it must have been quite therapeutic.
I just noticed one tiny detail.... did you really have a 'handle' on your mug of tea???

A lot of people will relate to this. Music can help us to release powerful emotions when nothing else does.

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Quite the quirky read -- made me smile -- perhaps I wouldn't actually stab a two-timing creatin, but I would stab emotionally. Keep writing.

i really felt that! 😳 the way you just described it makes me tinGLe!! this is just so.... itchY! I LOVE IT! I LOVE YOU! PLEASE WRITE MORE iTcHY!! this was superrr spectacular! <3

Wow! Me and my friend just read this piece and both of us are awestruck! Your attention to detail is mesmerising and your voice is extremely powerful. This is truly a beautiful piece of work! If you don't mind, could you please explain what you meant by the last two lines, hence, 'Chunks are always better than whole pages'? Again, wow!

I really enjoyed that too. All of your stories are equally as good no matter how long they are. Well done.

I enjoyed your story. Well done.