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great job with the rhyming!

This was incredible! The way you described the train made me believe I could hear it as clear as Beth could. Brilliant job. I can't wait to read more!

A gorgeous piece of writing. You did an incredible job, as always! I can't describe how thankful I am for you, Had!

Keep writing. I love reading it.

this is so good! especially for a girl off your age!! keep up the good work.

I'm sorry if someone close to you passed away, but you are a very talented writer. I liked the story.

The tragedy of losing someone so very dear to you. It hurts and you showed that really well! I like how you changed up the style throughout the poem, it made it interesting to read. Great job!

how flippin dare you >:(((
you did get me tho-

q^q am I rly that gullible?