United Kingdom • 15 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
The tragedy of losing someone so very dear to you. It hurts and you showed that really well! I like how you changed up the style throughout the poem, it made it interesting to read. Great job!
I'm sorry if someone close to you passed away, but you are a very talented writer. I liked the story.
this is so good! especially for a girl off your age!! keep up the good work.
Keep writing. I love reading it.
A gorgeous piece of writing. You did an incredible job, as always! I can't describe how thankful I am for you, Had!
This was incredible! The way you described the train made me believe I could hear it as clear as Beth could. Brilliant job. I can't wait to read more!
Interesting. I wonder what number 7 is referring to. You did a great job! I love how you wrote in lowercase, it gives the writing a more nonchalant feel, even if it's about death.
The horrible tragedy of losing someone without getting to tell them you love them. It hurts. More than words can describe. But you captured that pain and wrote it down into words. Good job!