United Kingdom • 15 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
You did really well on this, cannot wait to see more of your work.
omg this is so beautiful and sad i almost cried when i read this...remember that there are loving people in your life to talk to and they got you when you're down...great job on this one!
This is a beautiful heartfelt poem. Your words do a great job of conveying these complex emotions. If you need someone to talk out your emotions with, reach out any time. :)
This is so sad :( I hope you're doing alright. I'm here to talk if you wanna, just remember that.
The poem was really good, though! I love how you said that the father was a hero. That really put the oomph in it. I love how it's a story-poem, where the poem tells a story. You're very talented!
Incredible! You did a brilliant job explaining your point! I believe that the true meaning of life is to make the most out of it, so this goes hand in hand with that. If you believe in yourself and push to overcome the challenges, you'll make the most out of life. It's always been okay to tell people what you need help with, and I'm so glad you included that! Another great piece of writing, Had!
so inspirational and I also tbh keep all my emotions bottled up.
respect.
i really liked how you kept saying who are you and then at the end you answered the question. it was really sad and almost like a story. kEeP wRiTiNg!! :P
Another incredible story. I love the way you explained how love felt to the fire fairy. I certainly am intrigued by this. If you could write another story about this world, I will be sure to check it out! Great job, I really enjoyed this. There was a line of dialogue you forgot to close, though. But other than that, it was amazing!