United Kingdom • 15 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
This is so sad :( I hope you're doing alright. I'm here to talk if you wanna, just remember that.
The poem was really good, though! I love how you said that the father was a hero. That really put the oomph in it. I love how it's a story-poem, where the poem tells a story. You're very talented!
Incredible! You did a brilliant job explaining your point! I believe that the true meaning of life is to make the most out of it, so this goes hand in hand with that. If you believe in yourself and push to overcome the challenges, you'll make the most out of life. It's always been okay to tell people what you need help with, and I'm so glad you included that! Another great piece of writing, Had!
so inspirational and I also tbh keep all my emotions bottled up.
respect.
i really liked how you kept saying who are you and then at the end you answered the question. it was really sad and almost like a story. kEeP wRiTiNg!! :P
Another incredible story. I love the way you explained how love felt to the fire fairy. I certainly am intrigued by this. If you could write another story about this world, I will be sure to check it out! Great job, I really enjoyed this. There was a line of dialogue you forgot to close, though. But other than that, it was amazing!
This is gorgeous <3 I am so impressed, you are just as good as I thought you'd be. Maybe even more, actually. You deserve more recognition for this. It's incredible!