United States • 24 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I love the poem you are good
It's really good, and reminds me of my best friend who died three years back. It makes me remeber that she is still in my heart. Keep on writing the great stories.
Your work is very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!
I noticed this story is tagged as Non-Fiction I'm so sorry for your loss.
I like reading your work. It reflects to everyday thoughts to some or most people. You encourage and send out the message in a soft and bright way. Thank you and please do keep you the good work.
I really liked this poem, it flowed well and it had a sweet mother like feel to it. I believe it's a very relate able topic, suicide is often thought about daily for some. Good job!
You won't thank me for saying so, but, really, it is not the end of the world at your age. It only feels like it :-) Every single person who reads your poem will have gone through - or will go through - what you are feeling. It's a painful but necessary part of growing up and learning about life.
I echo what Entangled Fate advised you: enjoy being young; go out and have fun. There is time enough to fall in love and endure all that that brings!
A nice poem with your feeling expressed well.
Sigh, feelings so rightfully put out but you are young and have so much way to go. I am just going to say this, you can do a lot of things at your age. Love and dating, shouldn't be on your list right now. Go have fun. Do something incredible. It is a waste of time to date when you have your adult years to come. Right now should be about school and having the time of your life.