Sweden • 19 y/oReviews Received
Why are you apologizing? You have nothing to apologize for. This is well written possibly a few minor things here and there to change and you get the point across that you're lost and broken. Good job.
Slightly off topic note:
Your author note wasn't needed. If you were going to simply erase it you wouldn't have submitted it in the first place.
I like this one. You did a really good job at writing it, and believe me, you are not the only one who hates their own writing. Keep up the good work!