Sweden • 19 y/oReviews Received
I like this one. You did a really good job at writing it, and believe me, you are not the only one who hates their own writing. Keep up the good work!
Why are you apologizing? You have nothing to apologize for. This is well written possibly a few minor things here and there to change and you get the point across that you're lost and broken. Good job.
Slightly off topic note:
Your author note wasn't needed. If you were going to simply erase it you wouldn't have submitted it in the first place.