djreed7100

United States • 54 y/o

Reviews Received

Daniel J Reed reviewed Urban Tumbleweeds

Great story. Creative and very exspressive

2 Aug, 2016 0

Andy (Formerly Apemann) reviewed Back Alley

There are a lot of technical problems with your story, but the bottom line is that it is just not very good. There is no obvious plot or action or, indeed, any discernible point to it.

25 May, 2016 0

Rich Powell reviewed To be or, just to be

It's okay, but I'm with Apemann on this one. Needs work on punctuation. Excessive commas and fullstops, too. Also, try using a line down (shift + enter) instead of paragraphing each line.

4 May, 2016 0

Andy (Formerly Apemann) reviewed To be or, just to be

This was good... until the punctuation error on the third-last line marred it... ('im' for I'm)

4 May, 2016 0

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