Donald R. Fletcher

Good story, it could have ended badly.

POWERFULL!!

Asi es la vida. Muy lindo.

I love how you insinuate of these twisting emotions and circumstances without necessarily pointing to each...wonderful.

This is very good evocation of an only too plausible situation. I felt for your characters both before and after the bombshell of Dad catching the virus.

This piece is beautifully evocative of some material things--such as the placement of the grand piano in a bright auditorium where I heard a concert near Edvard Grieg's birth home in Norway--and of things that draw uniquely from Don's wisdom: the "creative pulse of Life itself."

I enjoyed your story. Well done.

A fine story, an interesting subject matter (Anglo-Saxon language), and a noble cat! Who could ask for anything more?