United States • 107 y/oReviews Received
I love how you insinuate of these twisting emotions and circumstances without necessarily pointing to each...wonderful.
Good story, it could have ended badly.
POWERFULL!!
We never saw emotion. All we saw was him handing the gun over, not even a hint of why. It's not necessarily a problem, just something I noticed. It does let us project ourselves onto both characters though, and that's actually pretty powerful.
Congrats Don, I wish I could write so beatifully when I get to your age - or at any age as a matter of fact. Greetings from Chile.
This is very good evocation of an only too plausible situation. I felt for your characters both before and after the bombshell of Dad catching the virus.