eloise2006

I'm giving this five stars because of the heart you put in it. Just the tip of the iceberg of so much policing and oppression against women in this culture. You are worth more than all of it. Thanks for sharing these truths.

I like the repetition you did with the beginning and the end. There were some grammatical errors, such as "..we were told we were pretty but men we didn't know" should by "by men" instead. My favorite lines are "we have been silenced to our opinions" and "we have been told that what we say is wrong." Such a strong and bold piece.

We are happy to nominate some of your stories to feature in the "THE WORLD WRITES Awards 2020 under the category 50 best short stories of the year. It's an international anthology which features only the best works of the writers around the world with regards to poems, articles or short stories.
You will receive a free ebook once it's published and also a certicificate of Congratulations.
Ebooks will be distributed for free.
Congratulations on your nomination.
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Taonga Mutambo Jr
"THE WORLD WRITES AWARDS"
CHIEF EDITOR