United States • 30 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
This poem expresses deep thought on a very sensitive subject, and I liked it a lot. I hope you continue to write amazing poems like this!
Nice little poem. There is one line that reads a little awkward, because its so long. It seems like it interrups the flow and should be two different lines. I could see this poem being turned into an interesting short story. I want to know more about the woman with the poison lips.
Love it! Poems and stories about death and dying always interests me. Your poem is beautifully written. Beautiful words expressing a delicate and fragile subject.
Nice writing. The story has a good flow to it after a slightly unsteady start. Hopefully we'll get to read more about these young characters :-)
Beautiful and elegant - just like the author of this lovely poem. Fabulous, hon! xx
Great story, hon! There are one or two small spelling and grammar errors, but overall - fantastic! xx
