Soul

Dark and sad, but reflective of the truth for some people; male and female. Thank you for writing and covering such a topic. It is eye opening.

This is an amazing story! I know it might not mean much because after all I am so young, but I really enjoyed this story! :)

An elegant poem covering the thing that clouds over most people's mind at some point in their life; death.

Great story, hon! There are one or two small spelling and grammar errors, but overall - fantastic! xx

Beautiful and elegant - just like the author of this lovely poem. Fabulous, hon! xx

Nice writing. The story has a good flow to it after a slightly unsteady start. Hopefully we'll get to read more about these young characters :-)

Love it! Poems and stories about death and dying always interests me. Your poem is beautifully written. Beautiful words expressing a delicate and fragile subject.

Nice little poem. There is one line that reads a little awkward, because its so long. It seems like it interrups the flow and should be two different lines. I could see this poem being turned into an interesting short story. I want to know more about the woman with the poison lips.