🌸Fate

This is grande piece but you do have errors. My advice to you is before posting you should reread it five times and if you are not sure then just ask someone if they can look over it for you to help you catch the mistakes because you are missing some words with other errors. Do not be discouraged. You story is good. Keep on writing.

Have a good evening,
Fate🌸

Love it so far!

Hahaha....Yes

So sad and written so well. Story well told.

I liked this. Dark poems are my favorite but towards the end you could of add a little bit more so the last stanza would have a better impact on the readers.

I am rather interested to see where this will goes.

Beautiful. This is relatable to a lot of people. Surely it is worth being one.

I love this. How I sometimes imagine if it was all in book. This is wonderful to read.