United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
pretty valid.
This story is simply amazing. I'm sure that your friend misses you and regrets those things. I once was in the same position but roles swapped. I wish i could take it all back. I hope you are friends now.
~abovelove(New York)
A story so great that I got me to run to my BFF and hugged her with all my might. Keep going! :)
I used to not have friends at all until I met Oxygen and Faith(I used their usernames). They have also taught me many, many valuable lessons throughout the time they have been my friends. Everyday I think to myself how lucky I am to have such good friends and how they don't care about how many times I doubt myself and make myself sound petty. They always tell me how great I am and how I am beautiful just the way I am. I know how you feel, feminist123, because I too have lost best friends. The lesson that I have learned is to be kind to everyone, even if they don't treat me as kind as I treat them.
Cool but sad story. you may want to jack up the age to 12+ and use grammarly to check your mistakes. Keep on writing, also see you in class! ;)
Dang. This one, is amazing. It expresses something that we all have to deal with. That lifelong bond that gets broken. That trust that you have that is so easily removed. It is written with such certainty, such truth, and after reading the Author Notes, it makes sense. It's always hard, and always will be, but we can always move on. We can always grow to be better. With spelling and grammar, it could use some more edits as well, but as a story, and autobiography, it's amazing.
