United States • 27 y/o • MaleReviews Received
This is very sad, but it's not a full story yet. Your writing feels rushed and is incorrectly formatted too.
Love the story, needs some better editing.
-From someone who knows the whole story ;)
I totally get it. Thanks for the poem, made me feel a little less alone. Hang in there!
That's horrible!! (Not the writing, the emotions and pain)
I just died inside.
You probably feel a lot worse. I am so sorry. I hope you've gotten over it somehow and were able to fin happiness. I sometimes dread waking up, to be truthful, but I don't know exactly how you feel.
Depression is hard. I hope you feel better soon. Losing loved ones breaks you in a way that can only be forgotten by short distractions. I'm so sorry.
its so god damn sad is this what really happened to you????? i feel sorry for you and i hope a light shines bright in your life
Man this has terrible format and grammer but the story is amazing and the sadness it brings me is unbleveable
That literally brought me to tears. I completely get - at least part - of it. My past relationships have been crap and I've found myself not trusting people as much as I used to.
Thanks for showing me I'm not the only one!!!!!!!!!! You rock!
That was great! I loved it! I know that I sound crazy, since it was gruesome and a little horrifying, but I think it was amazing!