Euphoria

I like it. Its a good poem, I just feel that some of the word choice and flow could be improved. Still a good poem though.

I like it! It's a nice representative of a working relationship. I feel like it is well worded and well written. I hope you keep writing!

I really liked House On Mango Street, by the way! Anyway, this is a great vignette! Keep up the good work.