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It's a very meanngful poem which (poetically) makes us realise how bad times have become. Time flies...

this is such a great story!

Write more!!!!

This was sweet, thank you for sharing.

I just signed up today and thought I'd read a story or two. Your story is the first I chose.

I don't condone astrology either, but I thoroughly enjoyed The Visitor.
It was light, humorous, and refreshing.

I rarely give 5 stars.

A really nicely written piece... but to what end? I am at a loss to grasp what was the point of what I have just read other than as a sort-of travelogue to the place you describe (in nice detail, too)

To my thinking, this is not a story, per se; more of a memento of a particular event and as such does not really hit the mark I would have expected. In saying that, though, you write wonderfully descriptive prose. I would hope to see that talent turned towards more 'conventional' (if I may put it that way) fiction pieces?

All I can say is "wow". Reminds me of early work by Richard Matheson. Keep at it!

I loved the discriptipn! Please do write more! I want to see where this is going!
But one reminded:
Make sure that you know who's point of view you are speaking in. You switched from Rebecca's to Micheals really fast, and had no seperation of the two.
Besides that, it was great!