United States • 18 y/o • TransgenderReviews Received
Please continue! You did a great job! I love how you even included George's colorblind point of view. A great story, I can't wait for more of this.
I love the technique. The way you tied it together at the end is perfect. You're an amazing writer, I'm sorry I didn't give you this review earlier. I may not agree with what it's saying, but I can overlook that. A beautiful story filled with love <3
I enjoyed your poem. Well done.
I'm not good at poetry and I haven't seen much about Dream SMP, but I think you did pretty good. Also, try using shift+enter when creating a stanza, then just use enter for a new stanza.