United Kingdom • 61 y/oReviews Received
Hi
I very much enjoyed this contemporary story -- I appreciated the mystical nature of the two souls seemingly reincarnated to do good.
This was a lovely read! I really enjoyed your descriptions and the twist with Giscard, and overall I think that this was well thought-out and well-written :)
Like the concept. Old-time feel of a good cliche. It's like Little House on The Prairie style.
Overall, great. With the sequencing of events and how you described them, they seem cut-off. Instead of a steady consistent flow, it is stop-and-go in some areas. Not to much, but recognizable, at least in my opinion.