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This is an evocative piece and I can relate to it. I live near a popular national park and there are times when its good to be alone at a beauty spot. The trouble is that it feels selfish wanting it to yourself all the time, and also many local people would loose their jobs but for the visitors. Even so, your narrator's mood is totally believable.

This is a moving poem with a lot of good imagery. If its written from experience I hope things get better for yoi soon. Good times don't last forever but niether do bad times.

I like the soft grass metaphore. Keep it up.

You describe both the main character and the setting very well. I hope this story gets a lot more hits.

You have a great talent for vivid descriptions, and for telling exciting, interesting stories. I hope you publish more here.

This is a vivid descriptive piece. I could imagine I was there.

I like this story, you've created a plausible scenario and described it with wit and vivid detail.

This is a vivid and plausible evocation of a build up to disaster, also of a man torn between two cultures. Well done.