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This is a vivid descriptive piece. I could imagine I was there.

This is fine descriptive writing and a good coming of age piece. I hope you keep writing like this.

I sincerety hope things get better for you soom Scorp. The word weept should be wept but that's a minor issue. I think you're showing courage and resiliance but I wish yoi didn't have to.

This is a good story with a moving ending. I could imagine myself there.

This is a fine story, You describe the setting and build suspense very well. You also bring in a big contemporary issue, the lithium mining or potential for it.

This is a moving story and beautifully told. I could believe in all three protagonists human and canine.

You have summed up a common dilemma very well.

As usual you write vivid descriptions, and the central character's decline is renfered convincingly.