Singapore • 23 y/o • MaleReviews Received
This was sweet.... A little confusing at times, and a bit rushed towards the end, but overall a good story.
This was a heartfelt story, although the mix of past and present tense does bring it down a star - if you can resolve that, then this would be 4 stars!
Thank you for your submission, Jailbreaker01
I love this because of how cute it is. Though, I must admit you need to work out some little things in your story. In my opinion, it was a little too rush for me. The character development was done rather sloppy but it is alright. You are a fantastic writer that will get a hang of it. I really do hope to see you write again.
-Fate🌸