Canada • 34 y/oReviews Received
Yes it is a very good story or rather a skeleton of a very good story. Dear author, I try writing short stories too (in Russian). I would like to translate this story to Russian with some modifications perhaps.
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True, once again in Starlink
I've been keeping track of this series and the ending of this scene just blew my mind. I can't wait for the next one!
it was very good and eye opening
I really liked the subtle emotion in this. You write from the heart and it shows. Well done.
I like the ryme and the rytham of this piece. I'm a prose writer rather than a poet but it reads good to me.
This was a good idea that you did not really explore to its full potential. As good as this story is as it stands, with a little more thought and consideration it could have been so much better. Fleshing-out your characters and the drama of what had happened to them to bring them to the situation you describe would give your little tale more impact.
I hope you will write more stories for us to read in future :-)