JPYoung

I'd have put 'barked viciously' rather than 'viciously barked.' The relationship between husband and wife is plausible and the twist is good.

The dialogue is amusing but convincing. Well done

"Where the wild flowers end seems like an original way of saying this is where the sea begins ot where land ends

As in earlier stories about this gang, you evoke a more innocent time very well.

A wonderful poem. It has a touch of Shakespeare to it. Well done.

This is a vivid descriptive piece. I could imagine I was there.

I like the comparison of the ringmaster to a potato. You evoke a different, I think more innocent time very well. The attempted robbey came up ratber suddenly, its as well to foreshadow these tbings. Then again it would be sudden for them. Overall, well done.

You evoke the setting very well, especially the swim on the summers day.