Kat

Now that's what you I'm talking about! I felt that you had true meaning and feeling behind this, some past experience that made you feel deep down that you didn't wish this upon anyone.
The rhyming was more decent, but the meaning is more.
Keep writing! -KP

Amazing, showed passion and clearly created the emotions of the poem. It cut deeply into me and I hope that if you're going through that - that everything works out alright. (Animals help a lot)
-KP

Oh my gosh it's so amazing!! Just one editing problem, when you're describing the lady for the first time you accidentally said "he" instead of "she." It was great and depressing at the same time.

Awesome!!

Oh my gosh!! No kidding! I feel that way sometimes. I never really put myself out there. Hope everything turns out ok, just remember, things happen for a reason.
I hate that saying sometimes - but it's true. Thanks!
-KP

I just cried!! There were a few grammar errors, but those can be fixed easily. I have experiance with heartbreak, and the twist at the end left me heartbroken. I actually miss the narrator!
It might be me just being too attached to reading and books. I really want to hear more from you!
Thank you so much!

I think it's great. There are a few things you could work on, but I think that it was amazing! Really brought tears to my eyes and made me stop and think. Thanks for sharing!

I usually don't read things along these lines but the story was well written and left suspense at every corner. The ending was quite unsatisfying; but I believe you did that for a reason. Good job.