Reviews Given
So cute!!!!
Wow.
That was great.
You should be a comedian.
Awwww. So many meanings and different ways to interpret it! I loved it!
Thank you!
-Kay
I think it was great! There were a few punctuation places missed, but I don't think it degraded much. The story was beautiful, and reminded me of the move "Up."
It was my favorite growing up. Anywho, thanks! Hope to hear more from you!
Wow. I almost fell over. That was great!! Please do write more like this!!
Wow! Great!
One thing, the ending was a little confusing. Was the narrator playing the guitar or the version of himself playing the guitar?
It encaptured me like light (it would make sense if you knew me)! I hope I get to hear more!
That's horrible!! (Not the writing, the emotions and pain)
I just died inside.
You probably feel a lot worse. I am so sorry. I hope you've gotten over it somehow and were able to fin happiness. I sometimes dread waking up, to be truthful, but I don't know exactly how you feel.
Depression is hard. I hope you feel better soon. Losing loved ones breaks you in a way that can only be forgotten by short distractions. I'm so sorry.
I loved it. I hope to be reading a lot of your stories. I connected gravely to this price of your writing, even though there were a few grammatical errors. If I were your parents/family, I would be proud.