Kat

Wow! Great!
One thing, the ending was a little confusing. Was the narrator playing the guitar or the version of himself playing the guitar?
It encaptured me like light (it would make sense if you knew me)! I hope I get to hear more!

Great job! I love love love it! I've never experienced what the poem is describing but now I had this mini craze a track of frustration and grief. Wow.
-KP

Amazing!! I tend to avoid reading things about different religions (it just makes me uncomfortable), but that was great and changed my whole prospective! Good luck for the future!

Dude, that was great! There were a few punctuation errors, but I loved it! Hope to read more soon!

That was amazing! I held off on reading it for a while because I thought it was the original poem, but that was hallarious! Please do write more!!

HOLY CRAP! That was amazing! Just WOW

Oh my gosh I feel like this all the time!! Great job!!

I know how that feels. 🤧
Great job on the (can't think of the word) -the way you used objects to describe non-existent figures-.