Kat

So sincere and loving! Makes the reader wonder more about what happened! The lines didn't feel forced and the words flowed brilliantly! I loved it!!

Thank you so much!! This really gave me hope and wonder!! Loved it!

Wow, I'm speachless. In a good way. I loved it!!

That's awesome. I only had to read it once, my mind works weirdly. Loved the pattern and copied inconvenience. :) -KP

Holy crap!!! That was hallarious!!! Love it!! Please do keep it up!

LOVE!! And that's great about the grades!! I hope everything is great in the future! Can't wait to hear more! Amazing detail!

Wow! Really discriptive! Makes me want to write something like that. I think I will stick to short romance stories though 😜. Seems to be what I'm good at.
Keep writing! -KP

Now that's what you I'm talking about! I felt that you had true meaning and feeling behind this, some past experience that made you feel deep down that you didn't wish this upon anyone.
The rhyming was more decent, but the meaning is more.
Keep writing! -KP