United Kingdom • 26 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Good job! Really took the reader through the emotions. Thanks for sharing!
-KP
Amazing!! I tend to avoid reading things about different religions (it just makes me uncomfortable), but that was great and changed my whole prospective! Good luck for the future!
Oh my gosh write more!!!! How could you end it like that??! You're killing me!! 😜
I loved it! A few grammatical errors, but it sounds amazing!! Please write more!!
LOVE!! And that's great about the grades!! I hope everything is great in the future! Can't wait to hear more! Amazing detail!
I think it's great. There are a few things you could work on, but I think that it was amazing! Really brought tears to my eyes and made me stop and think. Thanks for sharing!
HOLY CRAP! That was amazing! Just WOW
Oh my gosh I feel like this all the time!! Great job!!
The ending sounds great but doesn't really finish feeling satisfied.... I think it's because there isn't a rhyme there, but I don't know for sure. Keep writing!