United States • 24 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
One word can describe family: Everything. From hurts and joys to aches and laughter. Death may be the strangest occurrence in life. We know it's gonna happen- there's no avoiding it, yet when we come to that crossroad we have a tumultuous sensation of pain, grief, doubt, and some instances happiness. To reason through and intake all that is it could take days, weeks, months, even years to requite our emotions to the reckoning of death.
When a beloved goes so does our heart, blood, tears just as their's, but for different reasons.
I recall your writing about the death of your mother and the line hoping that Heaven be treating her well. I'm sure that this writing was sent to her as a gift for the well-being of her child, you.
I relate to this on a different level. Nice job!
I'm glad you can see the positive side of your mother and yout relationship. I hope you continue to heal. Some things will never be the same again, but we learn to deal with it. I wish you didn't have to learn so young but it can be done.
My mother passed away when I was in my 50s and that was hard enough. It must be worse loosing her when very young yourself. I've learned to get by without her, it took time and help from friends but it can be done. Its hard but possible. I hope you come to terms with your loss.
The emotion was iterated clear and strong but the formatting of it as a whole made it a little painful to read. Overall a nice poem though.
Usually I have a speech written out when I comment on your works. This time I don't.
Not that I don't have words for you, but I believe that music can be the messenger - it's certainly stronger and more unique when put up against my words.
Two songs came to mind when I read your work.
I hope you take a listen to and find what you are looking for and encapture it in yourself.
Queensryche - Someone Else?
Glenmore - Take On A Shining Star
