Kiraa

This is very creative and colorful with mega undertones. The strangeness of the details is beautiful. The story telling and progression was good, too. It felt short and choppy but also flowing through. Like a wave, but a lot of them. Nice work.

I enjoy this style and the emotion lingering behind it all. long sentences with blunt cut offs in between reveal the situation is unresolved and the anger is heavy.
you are not confined to the family earth gave you.
thanks for sharing this.