LeCat127

yes, i quite enjoy this.
please don't stop writing- i need stuff like this to binge-read. <3

I loved this poem just as much as the other two. Well done.

I really loved this poem too. It has great meaning. Well done.

I really loved your poem. Well done.

This was super satisfying to read. I really love the rhetoric, the message, and the whole general feel of it. Thanks for sharing!

Elaine's feelings are plausible and you convey them very well. I might have described the dining hall in more detail but the character's dilemmas are more important.

Wonderful!!!!! I absolutely loved it. It would make a classic film. Well done.

Amazing!!!!!!!! I loved it so much. It certainly has a touch of Harry Potter. Well done.