LeCat127

I absolutely love this story! It's so soulfully written and beautiful to imagine. I love the way that you use repetition throughout the story. It's wonderfully done.

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Well. This is satisfying.

I love it.

Jolene is a party in the worst way possible. 0/10

Very emotional. Very immersive. You're probably getting annoyed with these five stars, but honestly, "good" just doesn't cut it

I really like this!

Why must you hurt me in this way

This hurts even more than Grief hurt me
Why must you do this

The descriptions, like you said, are excessive, and if you don't feel like actively immersing yourself in it, it's probably impossible to get through this whole story. BUT, when I did immerse myself in it, it was pretty incredible how many layers of beauty were here, and how vividly I could see/hear/smell the forest.