LeCat127

To me, this read like a fever dream. I'm not sure I understood what was happening. It was interesting, though.

This is a whole mood.

It's so strange to realize that you never do things you used to enjoy. I think maybe the best thing to do is just pick a time to try them out again; make time to see if you can still find joy in the things you like to do. And if not, well. Sleep helps. Finding people to talk to helps.
In the end I suppose it is what it is, eh?

3.5 stars. ;) I like the writing style, and I thought the concept was interesting. This would be a story that I'd enjoy getting to know a few more details of, like why he was stowing away and what happens after he transforms into a merperson.

Well, I think I get what you're saying here, at least in my own way. Good prose, by the way.

Nice story, and congrats on the 50,000 words! Do you think you'll ever publish a novel?

This used to be the story of my life. It's nice, at least, to have someone worth thinking about in this way.

Nice prose. Relatable.