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You know, for something not profound, this is actually pretty good. You're not wrong.
I like the metaphorical feel of this story.
This made me think of a friend of mine, for some reason.
I noticed a lot of people asking for more of this, and I don't know if you have written more or not, but I think it's actually quite good as a standalone, just a snippet of story that is what it is.
That's a mood.
Nice story, and congrats on the 50,000 words! Do you think you'll ever publish a novel?
You write a lot of stories and musings and whatnot that inspire a lot of curiosity in me. It's all vague enough to both be relatable and to make me wonder what things everyone has that make them think things like this.
Nice prose. Relatable.
This is a fun little snippet. It kind of seems like a writing prompt.